July 6, 2007

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Perfect

Cheryl asks for perfect lines. My nomination comes from Keats' Ode on Melancholy:

She dwells with Beauty - Beauty that must die; And Joy, whose hand is ever at his lips Bidding adieu; and aching Pleasure nigh, Turning to poison while the bee-mouth sips:
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How about Catullus, 85?

Odi et amo. quare id faciam, fortasse requiris?
nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior.

Posted by: Alex on July 6, 2007 7:04 PM

Can we toss out some other favorites? We can you say? Good, here are a few lines that lodged in my brain many years ago, from Swinburne -

Heart handfast in heart as they stood, 'Look thither,'
Did he whisper? 'look forth from the flowers to the sea;
For the foam-flowers endure when the rose-blossoms wither,
And men that love lightly may die - but we?'

Posted by: Pat on July 6, 2007 8:00 PM

"But, soft! What light through yonder window breaks?

It is the East, and Juliet is the sun."

Posted by: Chris on July 6, 2007 10:48 PM

To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
-- William Blake

Posted by: darin on July 6, 2007 11:35 PM

Stalemate, jailbait, in "My So-Called Life" imprisonment;
Amazing what a good breakfast pickles make, isn't it?

Posted by: Bergamot on July 7, 2007 1:18 AM

Candy is dandy,
but liquor is quicker.

"On Breaking the Ice", Ogden Nash (entire poem)

Posted by: Ed Reid on July 7, 2007 9:26 AM

Dryden translating Horace:

Happy the man, and happy he alone,
He, who can call today his own:
He, secure within, can say
Tomorrow do thy worst, for I have liv'd today.
Be fair, or foul, or rain, or shine,
The joys I have possest, in spight of fate are mine.
Not Heav'n it self upon the past has pow'r;
But what has been, has been, and I have had my hour.

Not being particularly religious, I found these lines a great help when I learned I had cancer (which now, fortunately, is in remission).

Posted by: Tom O'Bedlam on July 7, 2007 11:21 AM

Nor law nor duty bade me fight
Nor public men nor cheering crowds
A lonely impulse of delight
Drove to this tumult in the clouds.

Yeats, An Irish Airman Foresees His Death.

Posted by: dearieme on July 7, 2007 11:41 AM

Our plesance here is all vain glory
This fals world is but transitory
The flesh is bruckle, the Feynd is slee
Timor mortis conturbat me.

William Dunbar, Lament for the Makars.

Posted by: dearieme on July 7, 2007 11:45 AM

I am a part of all that I have met;
Yet all experience is an arch wherethrough
Gleams that untravelled world, whose margin fades
For ever and for ever when I move.

Posted by: Cyrano on July 7, 2007 12:41 PM

Circus boss W.C. Fields, in You Can't Cheat an Honest Man, upon being told by a sobbing child that one of the circus elephants had stepped on her dog:
"Here's a quarter, kid. Go buy yourself another dog."

Posted by: Peter on July 7, 2007 1:14 PM

Circus boss W.C. Fields, in You Can't Cheat an Honest Man, upon being told by a sobbing child that one of the circus elephants had stepped on her dog:
"Here's a quarter, kid. Go buy yourself another dog."

Posted by: Peter on July 7, 2007 1:14 PM

How far from then forethought of, all thy more boisterous years,

When thou at the random grim forge, powerful amidst peers,

Didst fetter for the great grey drayhorse his bright and battering sandal!

Hopkins, "Felix Randal"

Posted by: Alan Gunn on July 7, 2007 1:17 PM

Say what you will about the Ten Commandments, you must always come back to the pleasant fact that there are only ten of them.

-H.L. Mencken

Posted by: Will Allen on July 7, 2007 3:26 PM

They are not long, the days of wine and roses:
Out of a misty dream
Our path emerges for a while, then closes
Within a dream.

Vitae Summa Brevis Spem Nos Vetat Incohare Longam
Ernest Dowson

Posted by: Gil Gilliam on July 7, 2007 6:27 PM

The careful textbooks measure
in tables at the end
the force that shears a rivet
or makes a tie-bar bend
what traffic wrecks macadam
what concrete can endure
but we poor sons of Adam
have no such literature

Rudyard Kipling - 'The Hymn of Breaking Strain'

Posted by: Dick Eagleson on July 7, 2007 7:36 PM

Dick, long ago, in an essay question in an examination for engineering students, I quoted just that passage and asked them to comment on it. I expected them to tell me about what they'd learnt in their management lectures. But one twit opined that the passage was irrelevant because "in a University such as this, few of us are poor". I'll never know whether he was being sarcastic.

Posted by: dearieme on July 8, 2007 9:59 AM

Among twenty snowy mountains,
The only moving thing
Was the eye of the black bird.

There aren't many lines of poetry that can give you vertigo.

Posted by: Slocum on July 8, 2007 10:18 AM

In the Carboniferous Epoch we were promised abundance for all,
By robbing selected Peter to pay for collective Paul;
But, though we had plenty of money, there was nothing our money could buy,
And the Gods of the Copybook Headings said: "If you don't work, you die."

- Kipling

Posted by: Andrew Stevens on July 8, 2007 6:27 PM

still.
the cold of your absence blows from the silent TV
the parking lot
the balcony with clothes waving good-bye...
hello.

Lily of the Midnight Sky, Bruce Cockburn Boulder, CO. 11/11/84 from World of Wonders

the risk then, is trying to define what poetry is, rather than the effect it has...

for the whole thing:
http://cockburnproject.net/songs&music/lotms.html

Posted by: D on July 8, 2007 7:35 PM

Andrew,

Another great pick, sir.

Truth to tell, it's probably too easy. Just about any randomly selected few lines of Kipling is certain to be a gem.

dearieme,

Were you teaching in the Ivy League? If so, I would be inclined to suppose your student was being cluelessly literal. If you were teaching at a state school somewhere, though, I'd be more inclined to suspect snark.

Posted by: Dick Eagleson on July 8, 2007 7:47 PM

Dick,

Kipling is an easy choice, of course. I do want some credit for avoiding "If." "Gods of the Copybook Headings" is probably my favorite poem by Kipling. However, I was cheating a bit. I wouldn't actually consider those lines perfect.

How about an American poet?

And so, all the night-tide, I lie down by the side
Of my darling, my darling, my life and my bride,
In the sepulcher there by the sea,
In her tomb by the sounding sea.

-E.A. Poe, "Annabel Lee"

Aldous Huxley would call it "vulgar" (with some justification), but I'm on the side of Oscar Wilde who called Poe "this marvelous lord of rhythmic expression." Certainly, there is no poet who was better at capturing the grief of the widower.

Posted by: Andrew Stevens on July 8, 2007 8:57 PM

"If it sounds like writing, rewrite it." -- Elmore Leonard

Posted by: Joe R. on July 8, 2007 9:09 PM

Mama we're all full of lies
Mama we're meant for the flies
And right now they're building a coffin your size
Mama we're all full of lies

Posted by: My Chemical Romance on July 8, 2007 9:10 PM

thanimayile inimai kaana mudiyuma - especially -malar irundal manam irukkum thanimayillai - yes i'm ancient and foreign

Posted by: Sri on July 9, 2007 12:19 AM

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Posted by: cywmi ecbythqdg on July 9, 2007 1:20 AM

Does your boyfriend know where you are?
The only thing your eyes haven't told me is your name.
(give the person a bottle of tequila) Drink this, then call me when you're ready.
Hi, will you help me find my lost puppy? I think he went into this cheap motel room across the street.

Posted by: tasteless bar guy on July 9, 2007 2:52 AM

(Walk over to her)"Ok, you can stand next to me, as long as you don't talk about it."

Come on, you can't get pregnant again.

Do you think I could borrow that dress sometime?

Excuse me, miss? Hi, I'm doing a scavenger hunt for my fraternity rush, and one of the things on my list is a umm....weird chick.


Hello, Susie. Your mom couldn't make it this afternoon, she asked me to pick you up and take you home. My, what a pretty dress.

Hi, I make more money than you can spend.

You have the ass of a great artist.

Posted by: tasteless bar guy on July 9, 2007 2:58 AM

Dick, my money is on "cluelessly literal". Anyway, in an examination you have to earn the mark. He didn't.

Posted by: dearieme on July 9, 2007 5:08 AM

"Paul the Apostle
Possessed an Epistle
So very colossal
It made the girls whistle"

According to Handelsman, sung by Blondel to Richard the Lionheart.

Posted by: Giles on July 10, 2007 5:02 PM

It started out so well
They said we made the perfect pair
I clothed myself in your glory and your love
How I loved you
How I cried

The years of care and loyalty
Were nothing but a sham it seems
The years belie we lived a lie
I love you till I die

Save me, save me, save me
I can't face this life alone
Save me, save me, save me
I'm naked and I'm far from home

Posted by: Matt on July 10, 2007 10:33 PM
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